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Tags: again - came - back - back again - poetry
Against the sweet colors of the setting sun
the clouds started to fade when there existence had just begun
and when I wanted to shut my curtains down, well there he was.
His face had wrinkles now, his hair was white but still I knew he came for me, and I was right.
We drank all night
not many words were shared
under the cover
and when the clouds came back again, and sunlight shone again, he went.
I may never see him back again, never hear his voice still I know
he is my friend
more so than he was my lover
Ina
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Posted 8:16am November 4th, 2010Thank you Dena! They sure can be!
Dena Stewart
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Posted 5:33pm November 3rd, 2010Your poetry is warm and touching. First I felt sad that the lover was fleeting, but then I thought that memories are sometimes more meaningful.